Talk:My Little Pony Equestria Girls/@comment-172.2.149.126-20130630050209/@comment-10483109-20130630054511

Make Sunset Shimmer's devil form less ridiculous, stretch out the climax and get rid of some of the filler to fit that in. Get rid of Flash Sentry, or give him a bigger, more significant role in the movie that's more than just an excuse to give Twi a love interest. Make Sunset's redemption less abrupt, and give it some decent pace and motivation. And probably make her come back to Equestria, since everypony has a double. Two Sunset Shimmers in a world doesn't really seem that good in terms of the balance of two universes.

Also, expand on Sunset Shimmer's backstory and motivation. We can't just let Celestia's previous student left unexpanded upon.