Talk:A Friend in Deed/@comment-5490610-20120218222242

A few tips for new editors:


 * Avoid the passive voice. "can be seen", "is shown", and the rest of these phrases are almost always unnecessary and they make the sentence more complicated and weaker. Use the active voice.
 * Don't reply to trivia points. The trivia section is not a forum.
 * Don't editorialize. Phrases like "If you look closely" or "incidentally" don't belong on a summary-style article.
 * Don't speculate. "It is possible, however" or "this might be because" do not belong in a factual article.
 * Don't add statistics out of context. "This is the second episode to feature..." is meaningless out of context.