Talk:Spike at Your Service/@comment-5369531-20121230035725

Decided to rewatch this episode, and I noticed that almost all of the complaints could've easily been fixed. For example: at the start with Spikes list, why not have him say something like: "#3 check to see if Twilight is right when she says my feet smell like garbage.  *sniff* *snifff* ugh guess she WAS right..." instead of what they had? I get that he is a young guy, but I found that part more cringe worthy than humorous.

And how about instead of Twilight going: "This is the noble dragon code. Surely you know how important the noble dragon code is to a dragon!" have something more like: " The nobel dragon code is an idea Spike came up with to keep his greed in check all the while helping out his friends. This means a lot to him, so we can't just get him to forget about it!" That way, we know more about Spike and it sticks to the former notion that all things dragon related are basically unknown to ponies.