Talk:Magical Mystery Cure/@comment-172.2.149.126-20130330060702

IDE a for season 4 Yes I am aware it will stink so grab your hurl bags In the morning it opens up happy and cheery. Spike then gets a letter from the princess asking that the girls come right away. So everypony goes to Canterlot. Princess explains that this mysterious force. That some call Eclipse. 800 years ago StarSwirl saved the day with a risky spell. The spell caused that only the EOH can fight against. Everyone asks why they need to know about it if it is not here. Celestia explains that the Eclipse went into everyone's shadow and if it breaks free that the shadows will take over the pony it shadows over. Soon it will break free when the sun and moon eclipse and the stars are aligned. So it's up to the Mane six to save the day. Spike Celestia and Luna you will here about later. As the girls go back to the library to get the elements of harmony they disappear into shadows and darkness. So the girls contacted Celestia. She explains that the Eclipse is so powerful that it might drain the girls of there hopes and dreams. To save the day the girls search for a spell to go into the eclipse. After the girls come into the shadow they are separated. As each of the girls find each other they find another challenge worse then all of the others coming soon. They have to FIGHT EACHOTHER. After a mini disccusion the girls decide that they will fight but let GUESS WHO WIN. Twilight wins (no duh!) And then we find the Elements but we can't find the bearers. We only have about 10 minutes left to find the other five. After a full montage. We open the last door end. To be conclded in part 2

Yeah I'm so sorry for making you be in the hospital I'm trying to improve my writing. Yeah I'm pretty sure there's like 47 problems. Another un mentioned villan the arc seems rushed. To predictable. I made twilight the main character lhe last minute yeah yeah yeah. But a lot of people here are good writers and I was wondering if i can get advice yeah so BYE! I have to go meditate in silence beacause tomorrow the RAINBOOM will be DOUBLED

-Krazzi