Talk:Rainbow Dash and the Daring Do Double Dare/@comment-27320592-20160208092930

I loved this story my favorite so far! I've read Twilight's, Pinkie's and Rarity's.

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The story was very entertaining! I loved Rainbow Dash in it. She was very cute and her love for Daring Do's stories are awesome! Great writing. Every scene seemed so vivid and the emotion conveyed was great.

And Rainbow Dash being called to do a task of her own! That was also very great because all we usually see is Twilight being summoned by mysterious forces. She took on a villian by herself too was also pretty great. I liked the viillian too. Having another Zebra was interesting. I liked that the Sonic Rainboom's prophecy continues in this and I love Rainbow's hopelessness. It's definitely a characteristic that defines her and definitely shows how she grows and can continue to grow. The ending was phenomenal and cute and made me teary. Just so great and exciting.

My only problems were that was no acknowledgement of Zecora. Like yes the story brings up the past but the ponies don't. Like, they're friends they should address each other's as such, but it all seems all mysterious for no reason. 2nd when Rainbow Dash was looking for someone to talk to about the book she could have talked to Big Mac I mean he was 2nd in line he probably finished reaind it. Kinda disregarded him. 3rd the ideas of ghosts kinda annoy me, especially in MLP. 4th Rainbow's link to mystical things seems to only stretch as far as the elements and tree of harmony and what not, so when something like this is touched on it is kind of unsatisfying knowing it will not be touched upon again, which would have been very awesome. If Pinkie's story is referenced why not hers.

Overall, 9.5 out of 10.