Talk:Prince Blueblood/@comment-174.56.210.213-20130517171427/@comment-174.112.214.31-20130519213614

Eh, it's standard fare. This kind of redemption story has been done so many times it's not even funny. The trick is to make it unique. For example, in "the Best Night Ever", we have Blueblood being trapped in the same day over and over again, and then turning into a nice pony based off of that. It's unique and original, even if the overall redemption story isn't.

Ask yourself: Why does he feel bad? Why does he feel the need to apologize?

If you can come up with a creative idea to that tidbit, then it'll probably be a better idea that the standard "I feel bad, time to apologize, Rarity is best pony" stuff. I mean, if you're a first time author then sure, go for it, but if you have some experience in the field and are looking to challenge yourself, try to think of a creative way to make that idea unique.