Talk:Power Ponies/@comment-4604642-20131223150855/@comment-8447843-20131223190856

I don't know if they say it in english but here we often say 'Writing is striking out'.

You have to get to the essence, a beginner mistake is  being to enthousiastic and wanting to put everything in it. I think they were full of good intentions with this episode, they were simply a bit overenthousiastic.