Talk:Episodes, films, and shorts/@comment-818549-20160617235136/@comment-24864975-20160618012751

Maybe add some sort of story arch to make things more interesting, and a way to make On Your Marks a clear-cut Apple Bloom episode from the beginning rather than leading viewer to believe that it's focused on the entire team, or better yet, actually have it focus on the entire team for the entire episode.

I'd also change Celestia and Luna's lines in the first half of The Crystalling so that question of whether or not they really are naturally born Alicorns doesn't get so muddled like that; you know, a way to better explain what they really meant.