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Fading Harmony Fanfic

Chapter One: The Job No regret. No remorse. The only qualifications for this hit. He was hired to ahem incapacitate the Elements of Harmony. So many people wanted him to do it. They passed over the best of the best just for him. His name, a mystery but people called him The Ghost. He came, he saw, and did his job well. He was first asked by Discord. He didn't want to be in stone but he said ,almost begging, don't take out Fluttershy. She freed him after all. Ghost may spare her but maybe not. Next, Sombra. Turns out he survived. He wanted them ALL out no exceptions. Ghost liked this request the most. Trixe wanted Rarity and Twilight dead. The Weather Factory wanted Fluttershy dead for escaping or something. He didn't care why, long as it paid well.His payment: 1,000,000,000 bits just for six targets. Pretty good. He chose his weapons carefully. One short-sword. Two revolvers with eight rounds each. A MP-40,his favorite and gold plated. And finally his most wonderful to him, a weapon he called Kelsie. Two feet long with explosive or incendiary rounds. But usually a .50 cal worked. He clothes were bullet and magic proof. His boots could survive any rock, spike, or limb that came at it. His mask was made of obsidian and was invulnerable to all most any attack. Painted on it was a design that made his target wish for him to stop. It was a jester with blood red lips and a white face. Yes he was ready now. He opened the case file for the first target. He smiled as he saw the picture of the blue pegasus. Yes this will be fun. She used to be a solider and a factory worker. Now she's loyalty. He smiled and said in his accent hinting German, " This shall be a pleasure. I might have a quite a show with this one." He shoved his sword on to the name: Rainbow Dash.

Chapter Two: Fading Rainbow He called a cab at the safe house. "Where ya goin son?" the cab driver said. "I'm going to Cloudsdale. Conference." The driver gave him a cover he put on his boots. "Keep ya from fallin back to me." He said thanks and they drove up to the elevator to the city. Mile high and a trip in five seconds. He walked (or floated thanks to the boot covers) to the palace. He heard a intercom saying,"Who's there?" It was the voice of the target. "Delivery." he said. He didn't want Dash to recognize him. "What are you carrying?" the intercom said. He showed her a cardboard box. The gate opened and he entered. She came down the stairs. "What's in the box? I didn't order anything." Dash replied in a suspicious tone. " Come here and I'll show ya." said Ghost. Then, as quick as a flash he shoved a stunning device on her neck. She twitched on the floor having spasms. He then pulled out a rod and hit her seven times on the face and back, shattering her wings. He then shot her with the MP-40 on her arms and legs, making her immobile. "Why are you doing this?" she n.said weakly. Ghost pulled off his mask. His face was pure white but had scars across his face. "Remember me?" he asked loudly. Rainbow Dash gasped in shock as she remembered. "I'm sorry! It was just orders! Please don't kill me! I am sorry!" she begged to Ghost. He spit on her face and smiled. He picked up RD and said," If you're sorry, then you'll scream louder than this." He picked up one of his revolvers and put it to her forehead. "W-what are y-you you monster?" she said, not knowing it as her last words. "I'm you're best friend. My name is... Shady." Click. He scared her by pulling the trigger to his empty gun. She and Ghost started laughing at his trick. Then, he threw her off the banister of the stairs in to a spectra pool at the bottom. He watched as she sank to the bottom. He got a red pen and crossed out he name. He looked at the pool and saw Dash resurface. He watched her, knowing she would drown in the very substance she worked to make.He then left the building and looked at a picture of his next target: a pink earth pony titled Pinkie.

Chapter Three: House Call He decided to stay a little at the sky palace. He found Rainbow Dash's liquor supplies and decided to have a drink. He poured out some tonic from Sweet Apple Acres. He almost felt sorry he soon had to kill the brewer. He soon became intoxicated and went to sleep. He dreamt about his past. His mother was always caring to him. His father beat her and Ghost. He always called him that horrible name. Slim. He always made sure he never ate, making him bone thin. One night Ghost, or Slim, beat his father with a baseball bat, breaking his spine. He was paralyzed and became insane from the experience. He is now in that hellhole of a hospital. He woke up a hour later. He decided to search the house for supplies. He found a .44 magnum under the bed, a sawed-off shotgun behind the bathroom door, and strangely a Wonderbolts badge that shined a rainbow like glow. A weird rainbow shimmer flashed around his eyes. " Ow." he said with a annoyed tone. He threw it into his pocket. He could use it later. He found a card for a taxi piloted by some gray mare. Cute eyes but stupid as crap. He called her and arranged she can take him to as far as Ponyville. He went out side and her. "Come on in, sir." she said with a slur. She passed him a bottle of Applejack Daniel's. He took a sip and put it in the back. A hour later, they arrived at the town. "Whatever you do, don't let you're guard down. She'll surprise the hell out of ya." she said in that slurred voice. Slim said thanks and went to the bakery. The pony behind the counter said, " What do you want mister...?" "Oh it's Shady. Here to see the baker." said our antihero. "She's upstairs. Pinkie! Someone wants to see you!" the baker said. He went up the stairs and saw the target. Adorable, but he knew her secret. He opened the door and heard a cheerful voice sing,"Here! I'm Pinkie Pie! Wait, are you new here? Well what's your name?" " It's Shady. Just Shady." he said. "Well pick a number any number! I got thousands!" she said. She was creeping Shady very much now. He picked 125. Suddenly Pinkie grabbed a huge cupcake and waved under his nose. "Want some?" she said with a tone containing impatience. Now, Shady knew what she was about to do. He heard the urban legend. With his hoof, he smashed open Pinkie's teeth and shoved in the cupcake. He then kicked her lower jaw forcing her to chew. He then starred to choke her, making her swallow. She fell unconscious. He then looked around her room and found a button. He pressed it and found a twisty slide. He threw in Pinkie and went in after her. They were in a dark room. It was covered in grisly decorations made from dead ponies. He heard she was crazy, but this was insane. He saw a strange skull with a beak on it. Shady tied Pinkie in a chair nearby and found a cart full of axes, knives, scalpels, and needles. "Didn't even have to bring my toys." He looked at his pistols and his sword. "Well not ALL of my toys, but most."

Chapter Four: Shaken and Bakin Pinkie Pie woke up in her own torture room. She always knew this would happen(her number was in the drawing after all). But she never guessed it wouldn't be her to do it. Suddenly, the stranger walked in. He had on a dreadful mask that scared Pinkie it seemed to be a skull with red lips. He said with a mocking voice," Gotta love the decor here, just great! Honestly I would add some paintings, maybe a rug but hey, YOU LOST! Just gotta ask: why? Why all this? Sickening really." Pinkie took a deep breath and said," You think you scare me with your stuff? I've done this longer than you jerk! I'd kill you but your to sick to even be eaten!" Shady chuckled and said," I was expecting screaming. Did I tell you I killed Dash? It sure was fun! I even have a souvenir!" From his shirt he pulled out two things: his short sword and a piece of Rainbow Dash's hair. Pinkie screamed," She was my kill you son of a b****! I'll f***ing kill you, you d*** sicko!" "Now now now, watch you're language! You don't want to be ah, what the word... oh yeah dead!" he said in a cruel manner. He reached in Pinkie's mouth and sliced off her tongue. He then took a needle filled with adrenalin and shoved it in her chest. "Shush, it'll be over soon. Hey you like games! Let's play one! I call it breaker!" He attached a machine to her arms, legs, and neck. "Here's the rules. If you can free yourself you can kill me. If you can't, every 30 seconds one of them will twist, breaking the limb. First legs, then arms, and finally your neck! We start... now!" Pinkie dislocated her arms so she could escape the manacles and picked the lock to her neck using a nearby bone. Shady screamed," Alright stop! Breaking time!" The left leg didn't snap. "Ha ha! Just bluffin! You won't die... that's my job!" Then a thought hit him like a knife. "Oh my God. I've become her." he thought. " I have to stop this now!" He pulled out the Kelsie rifle and loaded a .50 cal round. "Alright Pinkie. I'm sorry and I hope you are to. This is the biggest thing I've got. It'll kill you instantly. I forgive you for all this." She put her hoof on his mouth and smiled. She grabbed his revolver and said a quick prayer to say sorry to the families she's ruined. She was finally done with this. Shady didn't want to see something die like that so he left. As he walked out the basement and out the door he heard a gunshot. He shed a single tear. Maybe this wasn't the thing he wanted to do forever. But that'll be for later. He grabbed a pen and crossed off her name. He pulled out the file for Rarity. But before that he had a quick drink. Before sipping, he put some on the ground in remembrance of a great person. He took the file for Pinkie Pie, put on the ground, and lit it on fire.

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