Talk:Afflictions and illnesses/@comment-2076756-20120919192810

Please, describe what is happening in the episode, not what you believe is happening in the episode or what is implied to have happened. Don't describe creatures as if they were real creatures, just describe their depiction in the show. For example, don't say that cockatrices turn ponies into stone, instead describe the specific event of the cockatrice turning Fluttershy into stone and mention that Fluttershy tries to warn the CMC about looking into a cockatrice's eye. This is the difference between an in-universe perspective description that treats the events in the show as if they were real, and a description from the perspective of the viewer, which is the real, accurate perspective.