Talk:Daring-Do/@comment-4700073-20120204180338/@comment-5490610-20120204181728

Uh, this article has its faults, but being "all in-universe" isn't one of them. It doesn't thoroughly cover its topic and It has excessive use of the passive voice, and even a tiny bit of in-universe perspective, but it can be vastly improved without much difficulty. I won't be working on any articles today but maybe tomorrow I'll give this one a whirl.