Talk:Cerberus/@comment-3897868-20120317235255/@comment-3897868-20120318082500

Well, you could easily summarize this paragraph into the other paragraph and say:

"Cerberus caused a massive fright with Ponyville in his first appearance. According to Twilight Sparkle, he is responsible for guarding the gates of Tartarus and keeping the evil creatures within from escaping. Twilight explains to Spike that with Cerberus away from Tartarus, the "ancient evil creatures" imprisoned there could escape and destroy Equestria. This leads to Twilight taking Cerberus back to Tartarus, after Fluttershy tamed him with some belly scratches.  The next day, Spike receives a letter from Princess Celestia reporting a missing dog, with Spike replying [quote that he says, because I'm too lazy to look it up]."

That looks much better, and it makes it smaller. This is basically what I was referring to.