Talk:Transcripts/The Return of Harmony Part 2/@comment-27578467-20171105053430

On reflection, I think the tone of the first two edited sentences is debatable, or in other words I could see an argument in their favor. The comma on Discord's line should stay in the middle though as it's more useful in dividing the antedecent/consequent than splitting the consequent, even if his voice changes for that last bit.