Talk:A Hearth's Warming Tail/@comment-32136229-20160514185725/@comment-1746153-20160515075248

I get that. What I'm saying (and said before) is that I wish we were shown more of that avalanche effect. Otherwise it kind of seems like the cliched "sad childhood" which is common in mediocre and bad writing (see many fanfics). Like, at least give a reason why the character never changed for the better while growing up.