Talk:Derpy/@comment-5532318-20130203055203/@comment-5513888-20130203192716

Thanks.

Um, since you said in your first post you didn't think you're good at poetry, would you be insulted if I offered some advice?

The beauty in poetry is its imagery and figurative language, and the emotion put into it. So when you first write poetry, it's best to avoid rhyming, that's what I did at first. Trust me, there are ALOT of amazing poems that don't rhyme.