Talk:Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake/@comment-5490610-20120116155941

I'm going to use this article as an example:


 * Capitalization Where It's Not Necessary
 * Did You Know? This Article Had Two Trivia Sections, Both Written From an In-Universe Perspective
 * The rest of the article is also written from an in-universe perspective
 * The article barely describes the babies' role in the show
 * The reference is a mess.
 * The grammar is a mess.

I have refrained from rewriting this article to see if it ever gets better.