Talk:Appleoosa's Most Wanted/@comment-25270260-20160125033744/@comment-27578467-20160127204739

It fits in well with the CMC development arc, and no one is really out of character, which is what usually spoils it for me. The problem IMO is that they didn't handle the "bad luck" thing very well. Trouble Shoes's conceit is more goofy than clever - he feels more like a bumbling ninny than a tragic hero, but the story treats him like the latter. Also I thought there was a bit less of the usual charm in general.