Talk:Campfire Tales/@comment-7345250-20170827060948/@comment-24670881-20170829192704

The deus ex machina might have been in purpose to seem it more like a legend (where such are common). Not the best move but it could have worked if they had made his story more emotional (like made him and people mocking talk) and implied some mysterious explanation. It neened more time really.

But he still worked hard so this did not damage his character.