Talk:Ponies names/@comment-3055003-20111129164819/@comment-4612005-20111210045738

Disregard "Cupcakes". I read the entire thing in two minutes, and it was very poorly written. The dialouge was not using the correct punctuation, there were many spelling errors, and it wasn't all that gross. That really surprises me, because my brother can pull of hiding behind the corner and jumping out and scaring me everytime. The only thing I thought was gross was when Pinkie forced RD to eat herself, which was just O_o

Pretty much, it could've used more detail and better dialouge. That, and there's the fact that Mr. and Mrs. Cake would've known what Pinkie was doing and stopped her.

All in all, I could write a better story. But that would just not be my type of thing.