Talk:Rarity/@comment-4202158-20110911171837/@comment-5490610-20110911192142

For example: "Rarity takes great pride in her work and will do whatever it takes to make sure a dress is perfect for the customer, no matter how long it takes", or "At a fancy event, Rarity wears a..."

Let's start with:
 * descriptions of the inner thoughts and feelings of the character that are not expressed
 * descriptions that are not grounded in the show
 * "filling in" continuity from solitary events

After that's done, you can move on to copy editing:
 * fictional events in past tense
 * fictional events in present progressive
 * "it is revealed"
 * excessive repetition
 * Single-sentence paragraphs

After that (and more) is done, you can get rid of speculation, like "Rarity could possibly be..."